Very good man. The guitar part is great. The MIDI keyboards and drums sorta make it sound cheesy but I know the sound your going for and it works.
Great song structure.
I think it could use a guitar solo.

Great job tho.

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Thanx man. There is a little solo-kind thing. You can check it in the tab. Evanescence was not a "solo-oriented" band. But Moody did some pretty bluesy/ heavy-metal'ish solos
i like it!
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