#1
I met you at the bar
You where a living star
The other side of what
You would think

I dont know who you are
I dont know where you've been
I dont know where we are going
I just know where we begin

You fly your kite , so high
You make me try, so hard
You fly your kite , so high
You make me try, so hard

to be what you want me to be

A weekend spent together
Sent me to the brink
But not in the way
You would think

You are my friend
That i do not doubt
But there more than that
And i can get it out

You fly your kite , so high
You make me try, so hard
You fly your kite , so high
You make me try, so hard

You love where i belong
Can you bring me along
You love where i belong
Can you bring me along

hey guy just wrote this one and recorded so you can see how i flows better. Its on my profile :-)
What do you guys think?

Cheers
Last edited by MuseAddict123 at Aug 31, 2010,
#2
Well I listen to this, and I must say, I enjoyed it! The guitar part was a bit bland (no offense intended), but it all flowed very well. You should record more of you're own stuff!
#3
Cheers dude a lot, yeah it is a bit but i cant play and sing anything more complicated lol. im trying to concentrate on lyric and singing at the moment, ill add some more of my stuff got a couple more song. Thanks again man