#1
girlfriend moved away to st. paul. so heres this.


walk morning,
minnesota near,
found an old olive colored
schwinn bicycle near cape calahanda,
rode it until the tires were plum bruised and
my fingers were gripped blue-
thought of you once or more as i
lapped the shore, brakes wouldn't brake,
handlebars wouldn't turn,
i ghostied the bike into the lake and then
dove in after you.
Last edited by rushmore at Sep 1, 2010,
#2
joy riding bikes always seems like a good idea.

thought of you? or thought you of

maybe in diving in you'll find her a little closer after all.

and her music is really good
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#3
thought of you, thanks for catching that.

and yes, maybe. only an hour away but when you live with a person and see them everyday an hour is a long way with work/school schedules and blah.

and im sure she would appreciate that, unfortunately she hasn't recorded any of her new songs, which are quite good in my opinion.

and thanks as always.