#1
Whisper in my ear
How much you love me
whisper so clear-
-ly that you'll never leave
Your breath it echos
through my mind
Reflecting back the words
you spoke. Some kind

of distant memories
when we were young and free
without a care
without the pain to come and sear

Chorus

What happened with the madness in your life
what happened to the girl that was gonna be my wife
what happened with the madness in your life
you'll never really know
how close I came to letting you go

Shouting down the street
how much you love me
getting so heat-
-ed to say how sorry you are
Your words they echo
through my mind
Dragging the pain from
inside. Some kind

of off key melody
when it should be you and me.
without a care
without the pain to come and sear
Last edited by yamnivek at Sep 1, 2010,
#2
Quote by yamnivek
Whisper in my ear
How much you love me
whisper so clear-
-ly that you'll never leave
Your breath it echos
through my mind
Reflecting back the words
you spoke. Some kind
I LOVE this stanza

of distant memories
when we were young and free
without a care
without the pain to come and sear

Chorus

What happened with the madness in your life
what happened to the girl that was gonna be my wife
what happened with the madness in your life
you'll never really know
how close I came to letting you go
I don't really like the last two lines, they seem to interrupt the flow

Shouting down the street
how much you love me
getting so heat-
-ed to say how sorry you are in the first stanza this line rhymed with the second one, here it doesn't
Your words they echo
through my mind
Dragging the pain from
inside. Some kind

of off key melody
when it should be you and me.not so fond of this line, it's kind of an obvious one in a song like this.
without a care
without the pain to come and sear


just a few suggestions, I like it a lot though .
You who build these altars now

To sacrifice these children
You must not do it anymore