#1
Okay, I started to write this a while ago and then stumbled upon it again yesterday. Actually this is one of my first couple of tries to write a song, so I'm not really sure whether it is good, bad or something inbetween, so please be honest and tell me what you think about it.

Things to do on a rainy day

V
Rain pours down outside the window
On this warm night in June
While I’m just sitting in here
Only waiting for things to do

V
And it locks me in like a prison
The thought of you coming around
Reminds me of why I’m staying here
In this long abandoned town

C
The basement fills with the sound of my stereo
As I turn the volume up loud
It makes me wanna sing along
To a Gaslight Anthem song
Just looking for things to do
On a rainy day

V
1000 thoughts racing through my head
While I’m trying to write this song
Counting down the time
Until a new day begins

V
A heavy beat blows out my brain
Story of you walking your way
I try to follow your example
But really I only followed your step

C
The basement fills with the sound of my stereo
As I turn the volume up loud
It makes me wanna sing along
To a Gaslight Anthem song
Just looking for things to do
On a rainy day

Thanks in advance
-Tobbo
#2
its not exactly the deepest song i've heard haha, but i can imagine it being a fun pop
rocky song. i like the chorus, but i think you should put in a bridge.

C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1355917
Last edited by timfoley at Sep 1, 2010,