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1.Needle

Found the needle in the haystack,
but I was told to give it back
I did.
What I had searched for
was briefly mine
but now it's gone
now it's gone

From the outside looking in
this isn' t the way things have always been
(to be continued)

2.Reflections

Gaze into a murky pond
Hoping for a glimpse
of the sky
of the stars
or maybe just myself
What I'd like to see remains
Hidden under in the depths
Not at the surface
Something I must discover
Oh
If only it were so simple
as gazing into a pond.


Just a few poems I've written. Just wanted to see what you all thought about them, and if maybe I should expound on them or just continue to write them as a conclusion to my daily journal entries. Thanks!
Gear:
Alvarez Classical Guitar(don't know much about it).
Yamaha FG730S
Agile AL-2000 Black Cherry
Fender 25R Frontman Series II Combo