#1
This one isnt as progressed as the last one but its one of the best intro's ive made.
And i would like some honest feedback on how to prgress the song


Ofcourse i will return the favour with a crit to one of your songs

Song is called Idea 2 With a date

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/xXCRA1GXx/
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#3
I could definitely use a quick, almost marching rhythm section after the end of what you have so far. I love the guitar tones and the drum beats. The recording quality sounds great. Maybe multi-track a few more on the hanging chords. I'd revisit that theme later in the song if I were you, it is a great piece.

Take a look at mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1357710
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