#2
That was actually strangely cool, I didn't expect to like it. I actually quite like the rapping, in a Mi Confesion by Gotan Project kind of way. I have no idea what either of you are saying, admittedly.

I also like the atmosphere too, it's quite mellow, but the rapping and drums give it a strong rhythm, which enforces the feeling of the song, I think.

I think the woman's vocals are a bit too quiet in the mix, I can't hear what she's saying, but that might be the nature of the recording.

Which brings me to another thing. The song was really good, but I think you should record it in a studio or something so you could master it properly.

Just wondering, how did you get the bongos to sound so good? When I record bongos with a microphone, they're missing the main body of the sound, they sound really tinny.

overall, you guys did a great job. good work!

Crit mine please? Thanks https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1357550
#3
Quote by Gerbos
That was actually strangely cool, I didn't expect to like it. I actually quite like the rapping..............



thanks for the crit man

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YC6ZdQ-QfoA

here is the stutio version of it

it's not my song
I only play guitar in the acoustic version of it


about the bongos, I don't know

I didn't film this
I guess thats just how they sound when recorded through a camera's microphone