#1
Us Kids

verse 1
This is a song dedicated to the future generation,
the importance of education,
to the children of every nation.

I call to my brothers and sisters in Africa and India,
New Zealand and Australia
The United States of America.

Bridge
Stop All this fighting cant we all just get along,
Doing Drugs, Sellin weed
Cant you see all of this is wrong.

Its time for us to stand up proud
And together we sing this song

Chorus
Us kids, we stand here together,
Us kids, were here for each other,
Us kids, we are the future generation
Us kids, this song is for.....

Us kids, sing this song and sing it right,
Us kids, we have the future in our sights,
Us kids, we stand here together
Forever and Forever.

Verse 2
We may be young and clueless
But we are just as bright,
so dont judge us on our age and our height,
you just tuck us in and say goodnight,

No offense to mummy and daddy,
But us kids are here to stay,
it was you 2 that brought us here anyway,
we gonna study all night, and pray every day,

bridge
Stop All this fighting cant we all just get along,
Doing Drugs, Sellin weed
Cant you see all of this is wrong.

Its time for us to stand up proud
And together we sing this song

Chorus x2
Us kids, we stand here together,
Us kids, were here for each other,
Us kids, we are the future generation
Us kids, this song is for.....

Us kids, sing this song and sing it right,
Us kids, we have the future in our sights,
Us kids, we stand here together
Forever and Forever.

We stand here together
Forever and Forever. the end

Sorry but I had to try and write a song one day, hahaha
hope you all enjoyed it at least a little
#2
Sounds like it could be a decent rap song actually. Also this reminds me a lot of Wretches and Kings since it just came out, though that could just be me
#6
Quote by ILI7454
yea just noticed how corny it is lol beginers mistake?

yea kind of. when you write lyrics, try make it things you would really say, and try use imagery and meataphores. but this is a good start. i took months of writing one verse then starting a new song cause i couldn't finish them.
#7
oh thanks for the advice man,
well, im starting again, lol hopefully ill get better ,
#8
Quote by ILI7454
oh thanks for the advice man,
well, im starting again, lol hopefully ill get better ,

i think the reason it sounds corny is cause of topic. you sound like a grandad saying "in my day". try something a little deeper, it'll be easier to write about, especially if you've experienced it.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1358462
#10
Quote by ILI7454
lol im a pretty young grandad hahaha,
oh got it, so more emotion?

lol, not nessarily more emotion but try not to just give statements, try to say things people can relate to.(so dont make it really super exact,it will give the song mutliple meanings and people will be able to interperit it in diffrent ways)

check out my song link in my last post
Last edited by timfoley at Sep 5, 2010,