#2
Sounds good.
Nice chorus, song kind of reminds me of The Kooks.
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#3
Apart from the bad recording quality, the song itself is quite good. The different parts merge fluently. Vocals are okay, sometimes your pronunciation of the words is sloppy, but that could be because you have to concentrate on playing guitar and singing at the same time. Practice this a bit more.

What I don't like that much is that the verse permanently starts with "I don't blabla". That's a bit boring. However, the "check it out" part in the refrain sounds cool and works perfectly as a refrain.

All in all: A well written easy listening song that suffers from the bad quality of the recording!


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