#1
So I've been playing guitar for about 2 years now.

There are Three parts in the MP3.
> http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/whoahesgood/music/all/play892434

There are 3 sweeps at different types.

The first two are either 5 string(One with tap) or 3 string .
The last one is 6 strings with tapping (I fail hard at that one..)

Anyways rate me out of 5.
Negative comments are appreciated, it'll point out my flaws
Thanks!
Gear

Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
Academy Electric Guitar
BeaverCreek Acoustic Guitar

Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I
#2
on some sweeps you lift your fingers too abruptly causing an open note to play right afterwards, otherwise what you said included, it was a 4/5 3.8/5 if i was feeling like a douche today.
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#3
Oh that is true.
But I would say I improved a ton since my last recording about 1 year ago.

I recorded this after a year of starting guitar.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zveEvc7NyAc
Its a horrendous disgrace to sweep picking. But I recorded to see my progress.
Gear

Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
Academy Electric Guitar
BeaverCreek Acoustic Guitar

Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I
#5
2.

You seem like you have the very basic idea of the technique, but you're going too fast and are incredibly sloppy. Too much excess noise, notes held for incorrect durations, and no general flow to it.