#1
I just recorded two videos of myself playing

I'm 14 years old and I've been playing guitar for two years.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FI5gj4ycuHw

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hfye44a-MpY

Thanks guys, and tell me where to find what you want me to crit of yours.

And I know my sweeps are very dirty already.
#3
You've definitely got speed. It would have been nice if you had a backing track so you could show your phrasing but for a speed exercise it was pretty good. The second video seemed like it had better tone and that it was overall more cleaner. Some of your bends sounded slightly out of tune as well. All in all your technique is pretty good though, I would like to hear it in the context of a song. Could you please crit my song here
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#4
dude nice playing.. icant really crit it as it's short and your just playing random but fast stuff..
pretty good for 2 years..
and well... hmm i guess you ought to get a backing track and start improving your improvisation skills.. cause playing fast is something really cool but you have to be able to play it over a rhythm or something

here's mine https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=25199096#post25199096