can you guys give me some feedback on the "E lydian song idea" I have up on my profile?

I think it's sounding pretty cool so far, but I may have inadvertently lifted the middle section from a Dream Theater song... it sounded fine with just guitar, but with the strings added, it just sounds a bit "too" familiar if you know what I mean...

That sounded amazing, but I definitely hear the dt in that middle section. Play it in a different tuning to make it not the same exact key maybe? That beginning riff is ballin too.

C4C? Anything in my profile.
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