Chylyn
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Join date: May 2010
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#1
C4C. Please let me know what's wrong with it if you don't like it.
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ThorVonClemson
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Join date: Aug 2010
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#2
I hate death metal but that was pretty cool.
I think it'd be a good idea to throw some harmonized dim7 arpeggios in there.
Ometh
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Join date: Oct 2009
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#3
Quote by Chylyn
C4C. Please let me know what's wrong with it if you don't like it.

Well first of all, this is not even near to Death Metal; Second, it wasn't very good IMO, no ofense, but it just sounded like a random mesh of random notes, like you were trying to sound as technical and brutal as possible. You should just wait untill you have a nice heavy riff in your head and then work from there. Seriously, if I were you I would just scrap this, no ofense.
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DudE132
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Join date: Mar 2009
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#4
Quote by Ometh
Well first of all, this is not even near to Death Metal; Second, it wasn't very good IMO, no ofense, but it just sounded like a random mesh of random notes, like you were trying to sound as technical and brutal as possible. You should just wait untill you have a nice heavy riff in your head and then work from there. Seriously, if I were you I would just scrap this, no ofense.

I agree 100%. No offense but that was pretty bad. It just seemed completely random.
Last edited by DudE132 at Sep 7, 2010,
Simon Blackwing
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#5
I agree to Dude132 and Ometh, this is pretty pad i'm sorry, this doesn't sound like Death Metal, and apart the genre it's bad.
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