It was good. You played a couple out of key notes though. Other than that it was really good.
Critiquing as I listen: Woah dude great intro, I'm liking this. Very rock and roll Your drummer is doing a great job, ooh ouch there are a few out of key notes here. Nice bass and I like the mix. Good verse, catchy, you should get some singing on it. Also nice chorus good stuff. The lead guitarist is really good. Good job man! very very nice playing!

Crit my song? It's pretty weird, I dunno which genre to classify it in. I hope you like it https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1359512