#1
So this is my first thread on this forum and the first set of lyrics I've written that I've put up on here. I don't think its 100% perfect, the verses are a little short but for now it seems pretty good. Also you may notice the last line in the chorus is a little longer, I know it looks a little off but in my head it flows a little better...Tell me what you think.


-Shadows-

-Verse 1-
Invisible, stenched with death and decay
But your bitter cold breath gives you away
Covert in darkness is where you conspire
Another hopeless victim is what you desire

-Bridge-
So Where do I go from here?
Hope can be so hard to find
Like posion through my veins
Your always getting in my mind

-Chorus-
Sometimes I wish you would just run and hide
Always beside me but your never on my side
Your intentions: nothing but deceptions
And your black hearted promises are nothing more than little white lies

-Verse 2-
Spreading your disease like ashes in the wind
I feel your presence underneath my skin
Always trying to consume me deep within
An appetite for chaos and a thirsting for sin

-Bridge-
Where do I go from here?
Hope is so hard to find
Like poison through my veins
Your always inside my mind

-Chorus-
Sometimes I wish you would just run and hide
Always beside me but your never on my side
Your intentions: nothing but deceptions
And your black hearted promises are nothing more than little white lies

-Solo-

-Bridge - Acoustic-
Where do I go from here?
Hope is so hard to find
Like poison through my veins
Your always inside my mind

(Crawl back to where you belong!)

-Chorus-
Sometimes I wish you would just run and hide
Always beside me but your never on my side
Your intentions: nothing but deceptions
And your black hearted promises are nothing more than little white lies
Last edited by islandinthesky at Sep 7, 2010,
#3
"Spreading your disease like ashes in the wind
I feel your presence underneath my skin
Always trying to consum me deep within
An apetite for chaos and a thirsting for sin"

lol so brutal... also *appetite

great lyrics man, you should record this and post it.


Edit:

welcome to UG
#4
Thanks for the heads up haha. Yeah to me it sounds very similar to something Breaking Benjamin would right and they are one of my favorite bands.