lolometer1
UG's only melon deathstar
Join date: Jan 2009
902 IQ
#1
Ok i wrote this for my semi band that i've just started doing things with, i say semi band because essentially, it's my music class minus 2 people. Anyway here it is i feel like the ending drags on a bit and i'm gonna mix that up a bit in a minute
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simply put.gp5
simply put.mid
Ben

GEAR:
Squier Vintage Modified Telecaster Deluxe
Squier Vintage Modified Jaguar
Blackstar ht-5 head
Blackstar ht-408 cab
Landola V72 Acoustic
Seymour Duncan Woody SC

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lolometer1
UG's only melon deathstar
Join date: Jan 2009
902 IQ
#3
sarcasm? if not it only took me a few hours, i work fast when it comes to instruments
Ben

GEAR:
Squier Vintage Modified Telecaster Deluxe
Squier Vintage Modified Jaguar
Blackstar ht-5 head
Blackstar ht-408 cab
Landola V72 Acoustic
Seymour Duncan Woody SC

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Wanna be sex buddies?
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nope.
MobiuZ
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2009
1,119 IQ
#4
hey man , great song , i like it

allthough it is really repetetive , and imo it really misses a lead guitar or melody te keep it interesting , cuz right now its just the same thing over and over.

and bar 47 till 54 could really use some variation as well

all in all you have good ideas , and it cinda gave me a maiden feel , but you gotta put an extra layer in there imo , that would make it a lot better.

Anyway can you crit The Age of War for me ? its in my sig.