#1
tell me what u think

to those who thirst come and drink
and youll thirst no more
to those who hunger come and
taste that the lord is good
to those who hurt come and feel
the weight of ur burden lifted
to the weary come and rest
and have life

call to me and i will answer you
and tell you of the plans i have for you
call my name and i will sing to you
and tell you of the praise that you deserve

to wanderes and lost come find your home
to the weak and the sick come and get strength
to the broken hearted come and find true love


call to me and i will answer you
and tell you of the plans i have for you
call my name and i will sing to you
and tell you of the praise that you deserve

call to me in the dead of night
when it all falls apart
call to me when you have no hope
when your heart is broken and torn
#2
Very well done, TS. I like how you repeat the title a lot, "Call to Me", throughout the lyrics themselves. I personally see this as a song to give people hope. Keep writing!
#4
CrazySam has it right. This is a very well written piece, there's nothing to hate about it.
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to wanderes and lost come find your home
to the weak and the sick come and get strength
to the broken hearted come and find true love,
come feel my love, from the light above
How's that line in there? I thought it sounded good.
Take it if you want it, my good deed's done.
Leave it if you want, fine by me.
Just adding a bit of help

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