piratemetalhead
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Join date: May 2007
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#1
Just started writing up these riffs a few days ago, wondering what you guys thought

started off as a melodeath riff, but overall, I dont think Im steering it to a 100% metal direction at all. I guess I'd say its influenced by stuff from Kalmah to Billy Talent, though I dont know what genre I would label it under

anyways, any feedback would be appreciated, especially on the weird chord section (first time writing up anything sounding like that), and ill try to get back on c4cs. Also, the song's not called "unfinished", its just literally unfinished

oh yeah, and if anybody wants to throw up some markers, that would be cool as well, Im totally not sure what I would put as a verse, prechorus, etc etc
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unfinished.gp5
vulcan422
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Join date: Jun 2008
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#2
sounds sick dude, try this solo i added
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unfinished 2.gp5
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piratemetalhead
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#3
Thanks man, that solo worked great, I'll be sure to give some credit once I finish it up and post it

Didnt even think about putting a solo in there, but listening to it, it really sounds like the perfect time
champayne
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#4
I was a bit frightened at the intro, it sounded a bit metalcore-y, and I've seen too many metalcore songs on here disguised as "experimental" or even "proggy" *shudder, shudder*, but I was relieved at where it went afterwards. The harmonization worked perfectly, and the next riff did a nice job at building suspense. 13 was my favorite part, mostly because I like unusual chords arranged in that matter. There's nothing much else to say, except for I think vulcan's solo fits pretty nicely. Would love to see this finished. C4C? "The Nightman Awakens" in my sig.
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vulcan422
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#6
Quote by piratemetalhead
Thanks man, that solo worked great, I'll be sure to give some credit once I finish it up and post it

Didnt even think about putting a solo in there, but listening to it, it really sounds like the perfect time


Thanks a lot man, glad it worked out, i was pretty stoned when i threw that in there.
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i wish i could see Children Of Bodom agen
Quote by red157
Granted. But you have to endure support by the Miley Cyrus, Jonas Brothers and a steaming turd.

1. Death
2. Children Of Bodom
3. Metallica
4. Megadeth
5. Pantera
6. Cannibal Corpse
maximumrocker
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#7
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The intro reminded my a LOT of Unholy Confessions.

that is what i was thinking



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