#1
verse 1:
I hope we can make this work
Oh i hope you can stay forever
I hate the fights that never end well
Please dont say it's over
As I watch the stars I pray
Your thinking of me too
And you bow your head; close your eyes
while whispering softly "I love you"

bridge:
I never wanna see you
with a girl whose not me
I wanna wake up next to you
I want you to say we're meant to be

chorus:
Will you say you love me?
Will you hold me when I cry?
Will you tell me that it'll be okay
when nothing's going right?
Would you kiss me like you mean it
like you use to everyday
Would you smile at me just because
you've ran out of things to say?
Will you miss me?

verse 2:
My tears fall to the ground before me
and I brace for what comes next.
Staring in your eyes I'm falling now
I try desperately to catch my breath
I need you in my life so don't say I don't
You don't understand how important you are
You're the only perfect thing in my life
Baby I love you and always will my lucky star

[bridge]

[chorus]

refrain:
This isnt just a high school crush
Because it feels like so much more
No one's treated me like you do
You're the one I've waited for

[chorus]

I love you
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#2
try using some poetic devises like metaphors. its a little too straight forward for me. doesnt leave anything to the imagination
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#3
This is every Taylor Swift song ever written.
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#6
Your song sounds really professional. Don't listen to anyone who tries to change it. your lyrics need absolutely no work. Five stars *****
#9
Quote by bmxsulli
try using some poetic devises like metaphors. its a little too straight forward for me. doesnt leave anything to the imagination


Why would you turn something that IS straight forward into a metaphor?