#1
Writing for a new demo and this is the first track I've done for it.

http://www.myspace.com/aaronhetherington

Will C4C when possible

EDIT: EQ'd acoustics and mixed it a bit more
Flap it and enjoy yourself...

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Last edited by Donkey Fly at Sep 10, 2010,
#2
Sounds good so far. Feels like a song that could get a lot of radio play. The part at around 1:25 kind of jarred me at first because I didn't expect it at all but the second time it appears it didn't have that same effect and sounded good. All in all I really liked it, nice and catchy song. Could you crit my piece here
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#3
Donkey Fly,
Except for some odd noise in the background (audible on the intro & quieter parts), the audio quality is pretty good. The guitar playing is very good, so are the vocals. Very good melodies/song writing. If you could clean up the noise, I think the song is radio worthy. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1356300
#4
This song was very good, it is as you said, catchy. Which is really good The vocals are sooo good, I love it! I really like the reggae feel to the verses, I really love it man! Can I say it is a bit progressive but not too much(that is a compliment). It's like super catchy prog rock :P Dude, I think the songwriting and everything was very good. The instrumentation too, absolutely no complaints! I would totally put this song on my ipod Good job!!

Crit my song? I still need to find someone who's willing to put vocals on it :/ but here it is https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1359512
#6
Thanks, have messsed around with it a bit more
Flap it and enjoy yourself...

Xbox Live GT = The Donkey Fly
'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08
#7
well im not much into this type of music.. like ballad-ish
but still
damn!!! 0.59 opr somethign!! cool!! surprised me!! haha
the mix is done pretty darned well!! did you overdub your vox or two singers or some sorta octaver??

here's mine
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1359305
#8
My friends are obsessed with the band "fun." and that is what this reminds me of. It's good music, and you could definitely get a lot of airplay with it. The solo at the end definitely has the right feel to it. Did you use a real drummer for this or is it an RSE?
#10
2 vocal tracks, and I use Reason Drums 2.0 for samples and I mixed my own drum sound down.
Flap it and enjoy yourself...

Xbox Live GT = The Donkey Fly
'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08