Wquennasar
Melancholic
Join date: May 2010
423 IQ
#3
I love the melodies you come up with.

That being said, a solo would indeed be cool
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DaddyTwoFoot
Barned
Join date: Oct 2004
338 IQ
#4
I really enjoyed this. Super sludgy.
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Lord-O-Donuts
UG's white African
Join date: Jan 2008
382 IQ
#5
Does anyone want a crit. on something specific?
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D-Saster
Is Jesus
Join date: Nov 2006
410 IQ
#6
Well there wasn't much I didn't enjoy honestly. I liked the non-linear bassline, the angry crunchy chords, the cool melodies. I agree with those above that I think you should include like a really shreddy solo, I'd put it in half way through that last riff that repeats out and have the solo fade out with the end of the song maybe extend the outro a bit if the solo feels short. The addition of the acoustic is what really makes this one stand out for me i think though, keeps it alive and different. Also, cool title. Song titles that kick ass... well >_> kick ass lol. If you wanna check out one of mine its in my sig.