#1
So i making this new song and i have made one part but i would just like some feedback to see if it sounds good so far. It's on my profile, so please help thanks!
#2
is it the one called not sure yet?

the guitar doesnt fit with the rest of it... needs some work
#3
The lead guitar is out of time and sticks out a little too much in the mix. I'd quiet it down and re-record it in time. The backing and vocals sound pretty good though. With some work it could be a good song.
"On this life that we call home
The years go fast
and the days go so slow...

the days go so slow
."