#2
I really like your guitar tone. However, the quick drum hits at the beginning seem out of place. Also, the vocal phrasing during the verse sounds kinda... off. But I really like the chorus. It just needs to be a little louder and more hard hitting. Try using more dynamics, because the chorus needed a little work. Make the guitar louder during the chorus. Also, I really like your tone on the guitar solo.

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If you could check out "Walking Backwards" and let me know what you think that'd be great.