#1
water-logged in-depth-initely,
cunning you say, as to exclamate my
charm, are the words i present so
lovingly-no philistine or make
believe being could capture you the way i've
captured you-in a very escapable harness,
no harpoon no rifles or spears,
only thoughtless am i to say that
you will stay, forever, even a week or a day,
without constant love,
and i would expect nothing,
or nothing less of
anyone-
i will parade you if you'd like,
inside a carnival with some sort of light so your
smile is visibly clear,
it's not necessary,
but it's nice to know-
i am not alone in our love.
Last edited by rushmore at Sep 13, 2010,
#2
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




e-married to
theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

#4
just popped open a snapple and the cap says most elephants weigh less than the toungue of a blue whale. i was a little surprised by that and thought you might appreciate it.
you have a really great touch with shorter pieces like this and the last couple.

really good stuff.
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#6
is this the year for good poetry? everyone's turning out really great stuff.

this is exceptional. the way it controls itself and yet meanders like its slightly buzzed - love it.