#3
Somehow you`re rythm goes way off during the pre-chorus and your guitar skills also really need some practice. The chords in the beginning don`t sound 100% and somehow your voice sounds really boring, I think of the monotonousness in your voice, maybe get some singing lessons?

But it wasn`t really awful, just needs some practice...
#4
I didn't think your voice sounded boring at all. You actually have a pretty unique voice, IMO...very smooth and soothing.

You did have some timing issues with the guitar in a few spots though. Were you singing and playing at the same time, or did you record the two tracks separately?
#5
well i dont mean to sound boring aha just how it is really, yer i play the guitar at the same time as singing which is why at parts it goes a bit dodgy because for me (dont know about others) its not the easiest thing to do with a knew song that u havent played lots and lots.

cheers for the feedback though guys
#6
Vocals have nice nice tone, has potential to sound very good. Guitar fluency, tonal and timing issues, however this improves the longer you play. Keep going mate