#1
This is the first song that my friend has written and since he doesnt have a UG account i posted it for him to get some feedback =]

You're gonna eat yourself alive, every day and every night
and when you see it in your dreams, it won't put up a fight
and as the world begins to crumble, beginning at your feet
your confidence in shambles, destroyed by your deceit

When all you see and all you know and all you love it comes and goes
and the mask they wear or so it seems causes it's all your broken dreams

bear your strings puppeteer, your thoughts and actions seemed so sincere
I carved your name into my trust now blown away like bits of dust
your lies were chained into my mind, and now im free to escape your bind

when all you see and all you know and all you love it comes and goes
and the mask they wear or so it seems causes it's all those broken dreams