#1
I wrote this up last night. Not my best but not my worst either. thoughts or comments greatly appreciated. C4C

Verse 1:
I open my door
To find the air is crisp and leaves are brown
The time of our hands entwined is also gone
Oh ho, Looks like summers done.

I open my eyes
To find a blink can last much too long
The only warmth I find now is from this song
Oh ho, Looks like summers gone.

I open my arms
But find there's no one there to fill them in
The cool, harsh wind is the only taker to my invitation
Oh ho, looks like summers done.

I open my drawer
Pull out photos taken on distant shores
Cut them (in)to snowflakes and lay them among their fallen friends
Oh ho, Looks like summers at an end

The sun's fiery rays give way to icy nights and lifeless days
A snowy field can't compare to a beach in Brazil.
A life in winter is nothing to one day in summer.
Oh ho, But summer is gone
And I can't seem to get it back
Oh ho, summer is done
May jumps straight to August this year

"Instrumental/solo part"

I came across a crossroad that promised a sunny beach
The other leads deep into the mountains' reach
...I turn and head into the Rocky Highs
......
Summer is no longer mine
MIM Tele
Fender Blues Jr NOS
Schecter Omen 6
Squier Strat
Greg Bennett Acoustic
other crap...
If seeing is believing...

...Then believe that we have lost our eyes!!
#2
I dig it. I'm interested mainly in the fact that it's about summer ending and it's got that "Oh shit, summer's ending and now im back into the real world." feel to it. The imagery is also done well. Great job man.
#3
Thx man, ya its actually supposed to have a double meaning sorta thing going on, but I'm not so good at those. I meant to put the title as "summers gone, and SHE left without saying "Goodbye"...might have made it a lil more obvious...oh well haha
MIM Tele
Fender Blues Jr NOS
Schecter Omen 6
Squier Strat
Greg Bennett Acoustic
other crap...
If seeing is believing...

...Then believe that we have lost our eyes!!