#1
Man, writer's block f-in SUCKS!!! I know I have been absent for a while, but this is my latest idea, and I'd love feedback or suggestions. No idea as to feel or tempo, but I'll DEF crit for crit. shoot me straight, being polite rarely helps, IMO, LOL.

Do your worst,
You wouldn't be the first.
And while I'd LIKE to think I'm just unlucky,
I will admit that it's possible that I'm cursed.
so be my guest and spread your rumors,
spill my blood if it'll quench your thirst.
And feel free to talk shit about me,
I don't care enough to get hurt.


HELP!!! i feel like it's a good idea, but where do I go? peace, and thanks
#2
Quote by MegaNate
Man, writer's block f-in SUCKS!!! I know I have been absent for a while, but this is my latest idea, and I'd love feedback or suggestions. No idea as to feel or tempo, but I'll DEF crit for crit. shoot me straight, being polite rarely helps, IMO, LOL.
As I sit by the window,staring into space
You think i dont hear...

But i hear it all,i hear it crystal clear
Every lie you spread
Every remark you feed the wind
I listen to you and i bleed

I hate your words but i dont care much
And sometimes when i catch your eyes I smile,
A smile that's too bright for your like


So do your worst,
You wouldn't be the first.
And while I'd LIKE to think I'm just unlucky,
I will admit that it's possible that I'm cursed.
so be my guest and spread your rumors,
spill my blood if it'll quench your thirst.
And feel free to talk shit about me,
I don't care enough to get hurt.

Now some say i'm a gangaster
some say i **** men(only valid if you're a man yourself)
And this is just the begining
A part of a bigger blend

I could say things that will make your ears burn
But i dont care enough... something something(I cant think of anything that rhymes)

And after all is said and done
you still come to me
like we're old friends
smile,and sit by me in silence

But i could care less
I know the truth of your deception

So lie with your words
lie with all perfection
But, your face never lies
I'm a lot of things, just not blind

HELP!!! i feel like it's a good idea, but where do I go? peace, and thanks

I'm with you writer's block really suck's i've had one for 3weeks now (when the hell will it end??)I like your choice of topic and relate with it so i hope i could help

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1356783