#1
[Verse 1]
The genocide of the human race!
Cracked under pressure, leaving barren waste!
Sleepwalking towards the detonation,
Of the cataclysmic abomination!

[Refrain]
Don't say I didn't warn you!
Don't say I didn't warn you!

[Verse 2]
As destiny unfolds itself from within your hands,
You can see your hourglass, the final ticking sands!
Feel the breath of Death come crawling up your spine,
With this moments notice, you can't even say goodbye!

[Verse 3]
The jagged scythe between your lips,
The thrashing pain from your fingertips,
Has cut down every grain of hope,
Brought into this existence!

[Refrain]
Don't say I didn't warn you!
Don't say I didn't warn you!

[Breakdown]
Hear the harmonizing of your final selection!
Dark sun rising, your last transgression!
See your world as it is, a memorandum,
Of all your sins, a recollection!

[Bridge]
All you do is sit back and watch,
As time eats you alive!
Motivation, such a mess,
You choke when you swallow your pride!
As each second passes by,
The infection cells still split!
Like clockwork in your system,
You've got until the hands,
The seven they hit!

[Outro]
Dive into the pool of the sins of this world,
But beware for the catalyst within!
There's blood within the water,
But there's no signs of martyrdom!

*Now my drummer says the lyrics in the song are WAY too confusing....does anybody agree? :P just wanna know if i'm thinking about the lyrics too much.
#3
Honestly? The lyrics seem very forced.

They seem like someone was like "Hmm...lets just make this song REALLY evil!"

Is there an actual meaning behind them? Or is it just...evil for the purpose of being evil?
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#4
I liked the lyrics. Kind of seemed like the generic hardcore or metal style of yelling "evil" lyrics.
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#5
I defintly see the "evil" idea like the others said, but thats probably what your going for. I didn't see anything confusing and it's pretty creative.
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#6
As the lyrics 'do' sort of feel forced, I kind of like it. They are otherwise pretty good.
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#7
haha thanks peeps! i'm glad you said it feels forced because the meaning of the song is about how the world we live in is a very corrupt one and WE ALL HAVE SAID THAT ONCE and how a lot of us, no matter how much we say it, don't do jack s@$#% about it. So i wrote as a "warning" kinda....haha thanks for the positive feedback! i'm actually about to post another song for my band. :P
#8
The lyrics were very straighforward, not confusing at all. It can be seen as somewhat generic, but I like it. Very well written.

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#9
Your lyrics is really pretty much good, listening this song just reminds me with my life & world around us, I admire how well you write. It make me eager to listen, I will be definitely trying this with my guitar.... and thanks for giving me such a nice opportunity.... waiting for your new composition.
#10
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Your lyrics is really pretty much good, listening this song just reminds me with my life & world around us, I admire how well you write. It make me eager to listen, I will be definitely trying this with my guitar.... and thanks for giving me such a nice opportunity.... waiting for your new composition.


wow, thank you SO much! that really means a lot! my second song is up and ready to be checked out, if you so desire