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***1st off my friend said that some of the lyrics were a little cliche so you know, i know they're not amazing, but just because some might be cliche doesn't mean they are necessarily bad, but could use improving upon.Thanks for any help with making this into a better piece of music and also so i can write better stuff in the future.***

I took out the chords, just so you know.

(Meaning behind song: It's about a relationship that was good at one point, but started going downhill due to complications and issues involving distance, but even though the guy still loves her he considering breaking up with her and moving on with his life.)

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[Title : WeKnewIt’dHappenEventually]

[Verse 1]

Why do we live so many miles apart?

Missing you has turned into a disease

Killing me slowly, each and everyday I’m away…

But I’ll stay, Even though it hurts so much,

I can't make myself feel any better,

You’re the only cure, and just sight of you,

Could save my life…
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[Chorus]

I’m fading away from you,

We both know that it’s true,

I’m losing my will to go on,

But I’ll love you even when were worlds apart.

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[Verse 2]

If you speak those dreaded words again,

I swear my lungs will collapse again,

Inside of my chest,

Then I’ll be among the souls,

High up in the stars…

Cause even though it wasn’t meant to be,

Missing you will always be the death of me…
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[Chorus]

I’m fading away from you,

We both know that it’s true,

I’m losing my will to go on,

But I’ll love you even when were worlds apart.

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[Verse 3]

(Downward Strums Only)

So tonight, Let’s make things count,

Let’s make a final memory, To laugh and cry about…
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(Single Strums Only)

But, I don’t want things to end,

But sometimes, Things are left unsaid…

And I want to leave on,

A good note,

Not a bad one,

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(Downward Strums Only)

Please just stay,

For one more night,

Then we’ll be ok,

I Promise we'll be just fine.
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[Chorus]

I’m fading away from you,

We both know that it’s true,

I’m losing my will to go on,

But I’ll love you even when were worlds apart.

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I Will Always Love You…


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I wrote guitar music for it, but idk when i played it, it ended up not sounding too good so if anyone has tips on writing guitar music to lyrics as well that'd be extremly helpful.
Last edited by tbdsonic at Sep 20, 2010,