#1
we walk
we breathe
we lock eyes for a moment -
you are now here and
i am now there,
we are.

and the next moment you turn away
i no longer exist
for now, anyway


the earth turns away and
the sun doesn't exist
for now, anyway
but the crickets are chirping
and my heart is beating
and eventually the light will come
and we will face a much greater darkness


for now
out of sight
out of mind
.
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




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minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

#4


This reminded me of Memento. Great stuff.
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#5
mmm matt i grinned for about half an hour.
aaron
ravager, I will make sure to get back to you

thanks so much guys. lots of weird things lately
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




e-married to
theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

#6
this is one of the rarest reads for me on here. a piece that exudes vagueness and is better for it. there's a lot of thought between the lines, but it's written in such a way that i can take whatever context i need for the message and to write something like that is so hard to do. so yeah, great piece, really.
#7
wasn't overly dazzled by this piece- I think it relies a little too heavily in our own fireworks to make the show, so to speak. I am more one for your detailed pieces, but this is my opinion of course.