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Ok, so I think I vaguely get this forum now.

Prelude to a Life Without:

Spire growing ever higher
In ethereal pursuit, machine becomes flesh
To Laughter of the liar

Naked repetitions of horrific imperfections
Unmask deluded desire

The light flickers as foundation cracks
Oceans of sand fall to fire

Beneath the lies breeds demise
A life without, a life within
Eternal bath in loving sin

There we go, first lyric post, all (constructive) opinions welcome

Chip