#1
Simple love song I wrote about how I'm sure the right girl is out there somewhere, I just haven't found the right one (hence "the one that bears the right name")

Today I woke up feeling carefree.
Certain that nothing could get to me.
This morning might be the time and the day,
That everything changes and nothing stays the same.
When tomorrow comes,
And sunlight brings me in,
I wonder where to even start, or where to begin.

I don't wanna be alone forever.
Even now is better than never.
I've found it's not too late
To learn to appreciate
All the things I've come to hate.

Now that love is flowing through my veins
I just haven't found the one that bears the right name.

I'm sure you're out there somewhere
Staring up at the night sky in the middle of nowhere.
And you're wondering if I sulk in the same darkness,
You used to find comfort in.
Trying to find where sunshine has been.
Truthfully it's probably not where my heart is.
Part of me still wishes and prays for a miracle.
So you can get out of the cold and fall into me,
Right where you should be.

I don't wanna be alone forever.
Even now is better than never.
I've found it's not too late
To learn to appreciate
All the things that I've come to hate.

Now that love is flowing through my veins
I just haven't found the one that bears the right name.

Take my hand.
And let us dance, dance
As we move towards the inevitable end.
I want to be more than just your friend.
I can't always pretend
That I have it in me to make amends.

Because I don't wanna be alone forever.
Even now is better than never.
I've found it's not too late
To learn to appreciate
All the things that I've come to hate.

Now that love is flowing through my veins
I just haven't found the one that bears the right name.
#2
This is a bit better than half the crap I've read in here.

But really guys, you do not have to use the words darkness and veins in EVERY song you write. Where's the creativity?
#5
Quote by Jake9412
Simple love song I wrote about how I'm sure the right girl is out there somewhere, I just haven't found the right one (hence "the one that bears the right name")

Today I woke up feeling carefree.
Certain that nothing could get to me.
This morning might be the time and the day,
That everything changes and nothing stays the same.
When tomorrow comes,
And sunlight brings me in,
I wonder where to even start, or where to begin.
^^I like this "And when sunlight brings life in
I wonder where will I start and begin" might be better?


I don't wanna be alone forever.
Even now is better than never.
I've found it's not too late
To learn to appreciate
All the things I've come to hate.
^^Like this too but "lonesome" instead of "alone"

Now that love is flowing through my veins
I just haven't found the one that bears the right name.
^^First line is cliche(change it) 2nd line I like

I'm sure you're out there somewhere
Staring up at the night sky in the middle of nowhere.
And you're wondering if I sulk in the same darkness,
You used to find comfort in.
Trying to find where sunshine has been.
Truthfully it's probably not where my heart is.
Part of me still wishes and prays for a miracle.
So you can get out of the cold and fall into me,
Right where you should be.
^^Really like this but "fall onto me"

I don't wanna be alone forever.
Even now is better than never.
I've found it's not too late
To learn to appreciate
All the things that I've come to hate.

Now that love is flowing through my veins
I just haven't found the one that bears the right name.

Take my hand.
And let us dance, dance
As we move towards the inevitable end.
I want to be more than just your friend.
I can't always pretend
That I have it in me to make amends.
^^The first 2lines are cliche,rest is again good

Because I don't wanna be alone forever.
Even now is better than never.
I've found it's not too late
To learn to appreciate
All the things that I've come to hate.

Now that love is flowing through my veins
I just haven't found the one that bears the right name.

I really like this,you made a love song with all the appropriate feelings without making it sound overly cliche you have talentKeep writing!

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1363218
#6
Thanks guys! And I agree that I should probably change the first line in the chorus. I also might change the bridge.