jackblackyeah17
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Join date: Sep 2008
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#1
This is a piece I have been working on a bit lately, not really sure where to take it from here. Basically came up with the main riff when messing around with 5/4 time, and I was wondering if it sounds natural enough. Will C4C.

P.S. Drums suck
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Veil Of Osiris
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Join date: Jun 2009
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#2
I thought Intro 1 was a bit boring, but Intro 2 was awesome, it flowed very well. Verse was good. And the prechorus kind of comes out of no where, but if you fix the drums, so that it's china-china-snare-china then it sounds good.
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Join date: Apr 2008
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#4
i liked it. after that ending riff take your intro 2 and repeat it with some variation. maybe throw some odd times or something. just get creative and see where that takes you