Zeletros
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Join date: Aug 2009
1,339 IQ
#2
It's very repetative, basically you just make rhythm... and keep adding more rhythm over it on other instruments. Also, it could have been much more epic than it is now.
tjbhdeath squad
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Join date: Jul 2006
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#3
yes, repetitive...dont worry, if you listen to my mp3's on my profile i have the same problem...it's a gnarly progression don't get me wrong, but you and i? we get caught up in that gnarly progression and don't take it anywhere....TAKE IT SOMEWHERE!
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Frank_2022
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Join date: Jul 2010
87 IQ
#4
I think, it's a very good intro, very simple to play, but it sounds great.
But, if it was my intro, I will add a slowly powerful solo, with echo maybe. Think about it)
MobiuZ
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Join date: Nov 2009
1,119 IQ
#6
hey man you got some good idea's and it felt pretty epic , but ... like the others said , its repetetive and the only thing that changes is the orchestra , anyway i edited your leads at some sections and made it a little more dynamic , hope you dont take it offensive.

o yeah , this has potential , good luck !

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Simon Blackwing
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Join date: Mar 2008
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#7
Pretty boring, too repetitive and generic in my opinion.
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xbitmetal
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Join date: Aug 2009
289 IQ
#8
I don't think it's boring or repetitive. Genric yes, but I thought it was quite nice intro. I think it was good.
Paradox_Empire7
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Join date: Oct 2009
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#9
Thanks for your comments guys but I don't give a *** about the ''repetitiveness'' lol. I know it is and I won't change anything, but it's fun to hear what you think about it. I made this like 2 years ago and I ''improved'' a lot. I'll update a few new songs later.