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Like a child, I'd ride the swings of your mood
and you would ride mine too
We touched the sky again and again
But always fell too soon

Like your mother, I held you dear
as we danced through crowds of smoke and beer
and from my carriage, drinking golden sun
I calmly watched your home disappear

Oh, the lives we live
Oh, the lives we live

Like a child, I had simple intentions
eating dirt and climbing fences
but you were in it for the sleep
and now you bear false pretences

Like your father, My words would push out tears
they'd send arrows through your ears
My thoughts reflected false realities
like a path of light controlled by mirrors

Oh, the lives we live
Oh, the lives we live


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Cool. I thought of Forrest Gump reading that. I love Forrest Gump :P I like it.


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Cool. I thought of Forrest Gump reading that. I love Forrest Gump :P I like it.


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Ironically, I thought the exact same thing :p

I thought it was well written. I'm more into metaphorically speaking, but for simple imagry this sounds good Keep on Writing
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