#1
This is part 3 of my little ongoing project. I don't know if it's all finished yet, but we'll see what happens. It's called Snowball.


Snowball Snowball
In my hand
You're looking at
A broken man

Fading heartbeats
Empty Veins
In the darkness
Envy reigns

Snowball Snowball
I take aim
I couldn't hear
Her scream my name

Empty Promise
Fading Breath
In the darkness
I'm what's left

Snowball Snowball
On the ground
Who cut the rope
And let me down?

Snowball Snowball
Melt away
And hear the things
I'll never say.


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#2
Nice.I really like how you center this dark piece around something as pure as a snowballI would only suggest adding a break here...
"I'm, what's left"