#1
This is the first song (part of it) that I have ever written down. I have the melody in my head but I'm just wondering what you guys think.
--Verse--
Pretty Girl with an unknown future
Sneaking in the dark to find her way
She's unpredictable, despicable, trick able,
It gets worse everyday

She walks so tall for a girl so small
Breaking white is truly a sin
It must hurt so much, so much pain
to say the least I've lost my grin

--Chorus--

You think you know who you are
You still sit at the bar
Gettin your hands on anything, everything,
Ooh girl its gotta sting

The drugs and the books
Who knows how many you took
This is your obsession, depression
I just hope you come out okay.

--Verse--
Mixed views with different perspectives
A catalyst that fuels the flame
The ember burns on and on
Yet she still plays the game

---
Thats all I have for now, It's about my ex-girlfriend.
Gear

Mesa/Boogie Mark V Head
Mills Acoustics Mach 212B
Peavey Vypyr 15w
ESP LTD EC-1000 guitar (BKP Nailbombs)
Fender American Standard Strat
PRS Custom 24
Dunlop KH Signature Wah
Menatone Red Snapper
Boss DD-7 Delay
Zvex Fuzz Factory
#3
If you haven't already done so, just give the rules a quick once over. It'll tell you how to name your threads.

I'll just change this to 'Untitled'. If you haven't got a title yet, you can call it that.
#4
Thank you AngryGoldfish, my bad for not reading the rules. I'll look over them now.
Gear

Mesa/Boogie Mark V Head
Mills Acoustics Mach 212B
Peavey Vypyr 15w
ESP LTD EC-1000 guitar (BKP Nailbombs)
Fender American Standard Strat
PRS Custom 24
Dunlop KH Signature Wah
Menatone Red Snapper
Boss DD-7 Delay
Zvex Fuzz Factory
#5
I'm having trouble writing the guitar instrumentals for this song. Any tips to make it flow smoothly? I wrote it with the idea of powerful vocals with a alternative/hard rock kind of thing going on.
Gear

Mesa/Boogie Mark V Head
Mills Acoustics Mach 212B
Peavey Vypyr 15w
ESP LTD EC-1000 guitar (BKP Nailbombs)
Fender American Standard Strat
PRS Custom 24
Dunlop KH Signature Wah
Menatone Red Snapper
Boss DD-7 Delay
Zvex Fuzz Factory