#1
Okay, I wrote this quickly the other day. First time I've written something of the kind.

WARNING.
THIS SONG IS CHEESY. RIDING UNICORNS THROUGH RAINBOWS CHEESY.


The vocal lines are only rough melodies based on what I want. Lyrics have not been written, and probably won't be.

yeah, yeah, C4C and all that BS.



Don't take this song too seriously
Attachments:
Paladin.gp4
Paladin.mid
#5
Don't. Dragonforce suck :P

This was nice. Not my favorite genre but I enjoyed listening and I guess thats what you aimed for so good job :P
Last edited by Shaharz at Sep 27, 2010,
#7
Yeah, I agree. The solo is definitely lacking. Usually when I write solos it becomes a 2 guitar and a synth shred-fest so I don't want to really touch it any more

Thanks for the crit, man!
#8
i liked it , really gave me that happy/epic dragonforce feel !

Allthough the thing i hate about dragonforce is the annoying drums thats just plain boring and the same almost every song , but hey its power metal so i quess it should be forgiven , other than that i loved it , keep it up !

Could you crit The Age of War for me ? its in my sig.
#10
I'm not sure what you mean, but if you are wanting to re-create my song in your own style or something that's fine - Just give credit if you don't mind, and make sure you link me to it - I'd like to hear it!
#11
So cheesy =D

The solo was really lacking. Cheesy power metal is all about the 5 minute guitar+synth solos!

Great stuff, though.
All is ghost in memory and poison in the sun
#12
It sorta sounds like it could be a pop punk song lol
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