#1
The Wanderer and his Shadow

Blinded by darkness and endless tempation
Needless frustration in flight from reason
Dark and light intertwine as shades of grey consume

Try to find peace of mind
Inescapable, fall to ash
Parasite, shadow in my stride
I'll wander through this fire

Drive the nails deeper with a hammer of defiance
Slash the back of innocence, with evil you confide

Wander forever, hope has moved on
Shadow's embrace consumes the falling

Cower in naked shame
Forbidden curiosity forever condemning
Power lust a blinded must
Weakness, darkness, absolute

Try to find peace of mind
Inescapable, fall to ash
Parasite, shadow in my stride
I'll wander through this fire
#3
this is well written but umm.. maybe switch around the lines "Weakness, darkness, absolute" and "Try to find peace of mind", itll help with the flow, and it sounds better that way.. besides that, i got nothin, hope to see more from you
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