#1
this is a song i wrote back when i was screaming for a metalcore band
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CHORUS
My eyes have deceived me again
But I am no fool, the fools look ahead
Behind that light are the darkest things you have ever seen
VERSE 1
Dont act so surprised, darling
You should have known it all along
You prayed and prayed every day
But now play time's over
Wake up and face reality
VERSE 2
When everything crashes upon you
The empty sky will turn to grey
Will you stand your ground when the time comes?
Only a coward could run from his destiny
BREAKDOWN
If I held the whole world in my hands
I would crush it in an instant, without a second ****ing thought
No pity for the weak, no mercy for the righteous
Now bow before me as a god
Eradicate your kind like the filthy animals you are
Leave nothing in my wake
Not a soul to be bound to this world
#2
Quote by jazar94
this is a song i wrote back when i was screaming for a metalcore band
****************************************
CHORUS
My eyes have deceived me again
But I am no fool, the fools look ahead
Behind that light are the darkest things you have ever seen
VERSE 1
Dont act so shocked, darling
^ Felt like it fit better, personal preference though.
You should have known it all along
You prayed and prayed every day
But now play time's over
Wake up and face reality
VERSE 2
When everything crashes upon you
The empty sky will turn to grey
Will you stand your ground when the time comes?
Only a coward could run from his fate
Seems like it fits better, personal preference though.
BREAKDOWN
If I held the whole world in my hands
I would crush it in an instant, without a second ****ing thought
^Though swearing in songs can sometimes ruin it, I think it fits pretty well.
No pity for the weak, no mercy for the righteous
Now bow before me as a god
^ Evil, but good.
Eradicate your kind like the filthy animals you are
^Amen brother.
Leave nothing in my wake
Not a soul to be bound to this world


I really like this piece. Full of anger, and raw emotion. It's great.
It could use a bit more verses, intro, outro, etc.

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