Here's a song ive been working on for the last few days , its a mellow/sad acoustic thingy.

The song is inspired by a show i saw on National Geographic the other night ,
its about a Warlock Biker President who got shot in his house by an Outlaw biker because the Warlocks were expanding to rapidly in Florida and was later found by his daughter in a pool of blood.

on the funeral his family couldnt say goodbye to him because the cops used the funeral as a trap to bust the Warlocks who were coming to the funeral , and so the family had to leave before they could even say there final goodbye's , so this song is about the people who get caught up between the power for hunger , and get hurt by it.

Anyway its written in Open G. C4C.

Ride Forever Free
Ride Forever Free.zip
Last edited by MobiuZ at Sep 18, 2012,
Not bad. Ive seen some of your other stuff before and i find it kinda cool that you use a clean guitar a lot. I gives your stuff a unique sound. Good job
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Absolutely beautiful!

I love this song of yours!

The chord progression is great and catchy.

The main melody is catchy.

I'm loving the bass outro.

The drums are a little loud, not too loud.

Not too much of a fan of the clean guitar sound, but it doesn't ruin the song at all.

I'd give it a 9/10. I loved this song.

Thanks for the crit on my song.
1-4 Hmm i liked the intro, it was very catchy
4-8 i also liked the added synth
The chorus is okay... it will probably sound alot better with vocals
I liked the arrpegios going on in the 1st verse and the verse overall
The pre-chorus is very plain but thats okay, it still is decent
Chorus is same as above
I really liked the break, it gave it some breathing room
Verse is same as above
The theme is AWSOME and my favorite part
Verse, Pre-chorus, and chorus again
I liked the outro, it gives it a very natural feel

7.5/10 very good song!

C4C ? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1368804
Last edited by clanderson32 at Oct 10, 2010,
I actually remember this song from 2 years ago. It's pretty sweet, and I need to get a life
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