#1
Hi,
Guitarist friends please feel free to checkout my first track and give me some solid comments on tone, levels , music theory or general hate mail.... scrap the last one but feel free to ask advice if needed.. always glad to chip in on other peoples stuff \M/

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Darren+H/
#2
Darren,
First lead guitar is a bit over-the top for the start of the song, maybe you should have played that later in the song (give it some time to build up). I like some of the rhythm guitar parts, and some parts of the lead guitar. Doesn't feel like a fully developed song. Keep at it man! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1366979