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#1
Well guys earlier today I was looking through my roommate's PC while he was away and I found this disturbing notepad short story. Here it is:
Harry didn't want to live anymore. He woke up all teared up and completely void of the will to live. Harry sat on his laptop and deleted all of the recordings that he made in the previous 4 years from the computer. He then proceeded to delete all of the Youtube videos of his songs. After he purged all of his material from the internet, he got his poetry notebook and burned it completely, together with his drawings, paintings and collages.
He then went in the bathroom, took a quick glimpse of himself in the mirror, opened the medicine cabinet and took out the razor and the shaving cream. As he put them down on the sink he remembered that his roommate keeps a twelve year old scotch in the kitchen. Harry took the scotch and proceeded to empty the bottle, as well as all of his Prozac pills. He couldn't help his habit of looking above his fridge, noticing the familiar Katy Perry poster which stood there for the last four years. That poster was probably the only reason he delayed his suicide for so long. Every time he looked at it, he was reminded to keep working on his music, to keep on pushing, and to forget all the things in the real life that were bringing him down. Basically his dream consisted of getting so far with his music that he could one day have the oppertunity to meet her. Harry's feelings were beyond anything that could be explained or understood by a narrator. He had pictured the moment of their meeting for such a long time, he even had a notebook in full of things he intended to say to her. It was the only notebook to survive the fire. In a matter of minutes he started feeling like ****, and he returned to the bathroom to finish the job. He once again saw his bearded reflection in the mirror. The dim light coming in from his bathroom window made his face look even creeppier, as every single imperfection on his face was made more apparent. Harry applied the shaving cream on his face, reached out for the razor when a sudden gush of vomit went through his throat. He missed the sink and threw up on the floor. The vomiting was so violent that he lost his grip of contiousness for a few seconds and fell in the brown pull of vomit on his bathroom floor. Harry almost immidiately woke up but he couldn't gather the strenght to stand up. He rolled over on his back and reached out for the razor witch stood on the sink exactly above him. He barely managed to nudge it, but enough for it to land in the smelly mess he was laying in. He grabbed the razor, removed the blades and went on to ravage every blood vessel on both of his forearms. After he succseeded doing so he put his hands down on the floor. Blood from his arms began to flow across the room, filling the spaces between the tiles. Harry looked up on the ceiling waiting for his mind to go blank. But then he noticed something. He could see Katy's face on the wall, looking directly at him. He got so excited that he almost fainted. He understood that this is the moment he longed for for so long, the meeting he wanted to happen so much. Harry than smiled and whispered: "Perfect."
The story is ****ing disturbing as hell, what should I do?
tl;dr: roommate made a suicide story, advice needed
inb4 wall of text
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#2
Arrange a meeting with Katy Perry, obviously.

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#5
wow dude...


wow.


Fuck it, I'm not gonna read that.
You who build these altars now

To sacrifice these children
You must not do it anymore
#6
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wow dude...


wow.


Fuck it, I'm not gonna read that.


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#7
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advice: stop snooping

This, why the hell are you looking through his personal shit? It's none of your business, quite frankly.
#8
well written
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fill it with used condoms and a note that says

"Last night was amazing. I love you.

-Kurt"
#9
Some of you guys are ****ing cold hearted. I know this is The Pit and all but shit like that happens and if TS isn't joking, I know I'D feel like shit of somebody killed themselves.

Honestly, I have no idea what you should do. Ask someone more qualified then a forum full of wanking teenagers, you'd get better answers dude.

Btw, I thaught that story was really, really disturbing.
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You have feet in your shoes,
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Last edited by Rancid Ivy at Oct 2, 2010,
#11
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This, why the hell are you looking through his personal shit? It's none of your business, quite frankly.

Dude I wasn't actually trying to find anything. I wanted to play Starcraft and then I saw this notepad file just sitting right there in his D drive.
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#13
That story was extremely disturbing.

I have no relevant input other than that.
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Ok ok, I concede defeat.

#14
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Dude I wasn't actually trying to find anything. I wanted to play Starcraft and then I saw this notepad file just sitting right there in his D drive.

1. It's still not your business and you should stop jumping to conclusions about him and the note.
2. He plays Starcraft so clearly he can't be that bad.
#15
Well, it's just fiction... you shouldn't complain too much, writing shit like that doesn't make him a crazy psycho...

There's

NEVER

enough

GAIN


#16
very well written and your roommate is a great writer...I would talk to him though and ask him how's he's doing without him knowing you found this story on his PC...
#17
Quote by StefanVeleski
Dude I wasn't actually trying to find anything. I wanted to play Starcraft and then I saw this notepad file just sitting right there in his D drive.


Don't worry about the snooping guys, he has a perfectly legit alibi.

I actually did read it, but I don't know what you should do with it. It could be artistic freedom and not 'autobiographic' at all .
You who build these altars now

To sacrifice these children
You must not do it anymore
#18
Sounds like a combination of Eminem's Stan and the suicide scene in The Royal Tenenbaums. Do you guys ave a Katy Perry poster above your fridge? If not, you probably don't need to worry...snoopy bastard.
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#19
*sees wall of text*
*leaves thread*
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#20
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Well, it's just fiction... you shouldn't complain too much, writing shit like that doesn't make him a crazy psycho...

Well it may be fiction, but personally I think it's way to detailed to be completely unrelated to him.
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#21
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He couldn't help his habit of looking above his fridge, noticing the familiar Katy Perry poster which stood there for the last four years.

Katy Perry was only signed in 2007.

Picked a hole in his story there, didn't I!
#22
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encourage him to commit suicide on camera so we can all watch.



i think we should encourage someone to kill you on camera. only snuff film i'd ever laugh at....
#23
also do you keep a 12 year old bottle of scotch? and Misty_b I thought about Eminem's "Stan" as well haha
#24
Good story.
Maybe he needs to work on making some paragraphs, or maybe that was just something that happened when you copied it or whatever.
Anyways, good story.

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Well it may be fiction, but personally I think it's way to detailed to be completely unrelated to him.


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Lots of people aren't who they appear to be.
You only see their outside.
Follow the smoke toward the riff filled land
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#25
get it published
id buy it xD
If I stay too quiet
I can hear her walking by
Death cold air is moving
Like the touch of her hand

ikuisesti hallussa surua,
pienentynyt enkeli, ottaa minuun,
johtaa minut tämän arvokkaan valoa,
ja ikuiseen pimeyteen.
#26
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Katy Perry was only signed in 2007.

Picked a hole in his story there, didn't I!

xDDDDD
pwnd
If I stay too quiet
I can hear her walking by
Death cold air is moving
Like the touch of her hand

ikuisesti hallussa surua,
pienentynyt enkeli, ottaa minuun,
johtaa minut tämän arvokkaan valoa,
ja ikuiseen pimeyteen.
#27
Quote by MadClownDisease
Katy Perry was only signed in 2007.

Picked a hole in his story there, didn't I!

No actually, this is brilliant news for TS.

TS, your roommate won't kill himself for another year. Don't worry.
it's all just coming back
it's all coming back

it's all coming back to me
#28
Quote by MadClownDisease
Katy Perry was only signed in 2007.

Picked a hole in his story there, didn't I!

Holy **** he's maybe writing this as a plan for a future event, maybe four years from now. The countdown should begin when I see a Katy Perry poster on my wall tough.
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#29
You aren't going to get very good advice generally from the pit in a thread like this. I'd personally tell you to pm SteveHouse about it, he'll have a better idea than most here about what to do.
#30
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You aren't going to get very good advice generally from the pit in a thread like this. I'd personally tell you to pm SteveHouse about it, he'll have a better idea than most here about what to do.

I don't really feel like PMing anyone. I'm literally shaking like it's 2 degrees in here, and so much is going through my mind right now.
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But we all know gay people want to rape every straight male they see.... Especially children, all gay people are pedophiles. Fact.

#31
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You aren't going to get very good advice generally from the pit in a thread like this. I'd personally tell you to pm SteveHouse about it, he'll have a better idea than most here about what to do.


although he will probably advice you to sex your roommate up.
You who build these altars now

To sacrifice these children
You must not do it anymore
#32
Joking aside, it's very possible for your roommate just to be considering this very much in a fictional kind of way.
ie these are real thoughts, but writing it down and running through it like this is his release. So don't go jumping on him next time you see him, crying "DON'T DO IT!"

BUT also you shouldn't just pass over this and forget it. I can't see any conversation starting "so i was just snooping through your personal things..." going well, so just be a good friend. Supportive and concerned. Gain their trust and if they're willing to just give them a nudge to open up any problems they might be feeling.
#33
I read the title and hovered and was sure what contained would be some kind of awesome Creepypasta. Haven't read it yet, will I be disappoint?

EDIT: Not disappoint. Also the first time I'd ever seen an OP too late with his 'inb4'
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#34
My god, he burned his poetry notebook!
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#35
My friend has written a couple of suicide stories (not nearly as well as this one is written, I might add), but he just does it because the topic fascinates him. This is possibly the case with your roomie.
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#36
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Joking aside, it's very possible for your roommate just to be considering this very much in a fictional kind of way.
ie these are real thoughts, but writing it down and running through it like this is his release. So don't go jumping on him next time you see him, crying "DON'T DO IT!"

BUT also you shouldn't just pass over this and forget it. I can't see any conversation starting "so i was just snooping through your personal things..." going well, so just be a good friend. Supportive and concerned. Gain their trust and if they're willing to just give them a nudge to open up any problems they might be feeling.

I don't plan on bringing up anything yet, but if I see him changing his mood (he's usually a pretty cheerful guy), or if I see Katy Perry posters popping out I'll definitely intervine.
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But we all know gay people want to rape every straight male they see.... Especially children, all gay people are pedophiles. Fact.

#37
People don't use proper grammar and punctuation in suicide notes and/or stories. Hes totally fine, probably just wrote it for fun or something.
#38
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i think we should encourage someone to kill you on camera. only snuff film i'd ever laugh at....

Uh-Oh. Looks like someone recently lost someone to suicide.
#39
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I read the title and hovered and was sure what contained would be some kind of awesome Creepypasta. Haven't read it yet, will I be dissapoint?

No you won't it's actually pretty well written, because he's an English literature strudent.
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#40
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Well guys earlier today I was looking through my roommate's PC while he was away


Not cool in the least.
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