#1
and; up until moonlight
says
tomorrow's hello
behind a whisper of every
it and of
or
i
did not
think that you could
dance (like a tree can
dance(a tree can
dance when it really wants to) i saw you
dance the
dance that
dancers
dance when they find out that a tree can
dance if he really wants to
dance

SOLO
346@(opulence)^&@_
to* inside of another%^9
#(;24)
DIOS MIO
did you know a river can
dance?

HOW CAN YOU NEVER
LOOK RIGHT UP AT
THE
CLOUDS
AND SEE
THE
WAY THAT
THE(Y)
MELD WITH
THE
WIND.


(did you know something about the clouds
(did you know they can dance
if you look at them right?)

(did you know something about
me? (did you know that I have never
danced.)
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#2
i thought the caps were unnecessary, it read off much more abrasive than I imagine they should, but of course, that is just my imagination...
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#3
I don't know. I kind of wanted it to be abrasive, but not really abrasive. There should be something in between capital and lowercase to suit my needs.
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#5
thats what i was thinking. i understand that it should have some tension to it, but i felt like caps were just... screaming wildly


other than that, i enjoyed this. i hope i know what you're saying, and if i'm getting it right... just get up and dance. just do it. do it now, do it later, do it forever, and find someone who looks at you right and sees you dance when you speak, when you eat, when you sleep, when you sing or sit quietly.
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




e-married to
theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja