benonbass1
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#1
Well, technically MkIII.

I've uploaded this before, made it some corrections and re-uploaded it to that same thread, but I was told by my band to make it heavier and mathier. It's still not particularly either, but I think it's just about right now.

I know it's not particular disco either But I quite like the look on peoples faces when I say we are "Progressive Disco metal/Dramatic Prancecore"

Will C4C, just post a link in your reply and I'll look asap

Cheers again guys
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swashbuckle50
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#2
reminded me of BTBAM if they wrote a lullaby. The lead at bar 26 could have continued and would have been amazing IMO. Very interesting song.
Your use of odd time signatures and tempo changes was very tasteful. Really good chord progressions as well.
From bar 87 on it was killer. I loved that weird solo and the rhythm that came after it. so badass.
Good job mang keep it up.

check out my song https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1367944
benonbass1
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#4
Quote by swashbuckle50
reminded me of BTBAM if they wrote a lullaby. The lead at bar 26 could have continued and would have been amazing IMO. Very interesting song.
Your use of odd time signatures and tempo changes was very tasteful. Really good chord progressions as well.
From bar 87 on it was killer. I loved that weird solo and the rhythm that came after it. so badass.
Good job mang keep it up.

check out my song https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1367944


Cheers

Ah yeah, I meant to complete that lead at 26, but I'm not a guitarist. I haven't actually passed this along to my guitarists to improve on yet. I'll get onto it

Gayotic? Well I suppose if you don't like the mathcore sound theny ou probably wouldn't like it anyway, so no probs dude
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#5
i honestly loved this. never quite heard anything like it. the highlight of the song is definitely the solo though.
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#6
Quote by slayerfrk
id say its mathcore in the sense that it sounds chaotic and gayotic as well as non melodic and spastic with no rhythm, sorry. i just dont like spazzy chromatic nonsense. feel free to bash me though.


Non melodic? No rhythm? Spazzy chrmatic nonsense? Did you listen?

This is art.
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#7
I really enjoyed pretty much every part of this, haha. Really awesome ideas and unique ones as well.

At measure 28 (with a lead in from 27) I INSTANTLY had Protest The Hero's Goddess Gagged come to mind though.

2:32
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FKFrgt2QDQ0

Haha, though that's not a big deal, whether you know them or not.


If you wanna crit something of mine, even though my crit wasn't to intensive, please try this... https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1368998

Not finished at all or anything, but still like feedback. Thanks. ;D
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benonbass1
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#8
Ah yeah, so it does!

PTH are one of my favourite bands, but I'm not so familiar with the last few songs of Fortress (I usually get completely overloaded with awesome after limb from limb tbh )