PLUCK
Robb Flynn
Join date: Feb 2006
148 IQ
#1
Found this while looking through my computer. Had a lot of fun making this but I'm not sure about all the transitions - the random slide before the breakdown etc. Would be fun to know what others think about the riffs and what I could improve!
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Riffin.gp4
Riffin.gp5
Riffin.mid
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Dio10101
UG's Biggest Idiot
Join date: Aug 2008
874 IQ
#2
Cool stuff, but the end bit(which i assume to be a chorus) felt like it would have been better going half as long then going back into something fast and heavy.
ibz120
Waggoner Freak
Join date: Jul 2009
762 IQ
#3
I really like the "chorus" riff. I think the way the "pre-chorus" part leads to the chorus, makes it feel like the chorus is the part before the actual chorus (if that makes any sense.. lol). I would try to work on transitions between parts, and the dynamics of them :P.