Join date: Jun 2008
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Good start so far, liking the riffs (in that super low tuning ) and the switching lead guitars.

Drums seem decent so far but I would keep up the style you have at 13 - 16 as this seems more like your typical djent sorta' stuff. Use the simple chugga' chugga' stuff with the high chords on top sparingly as it can become very balnd very quickly (or at least I think so ).

Not much to crit but if you work on it more and post a new version I'll do another crit and give it a rating if I can.

EDIT: Came to mind just as I finished - try out changing time sigs but not -too- much, keep it subtle.