herby190
UnBanned
Join date: Mar 2008
7,674 IQ
#1
C4C.

The outro of this piece has yet to be written, because I'd like to get my bandmates opinions on what to do with it.

This is meant for RSE.

As always, be honest, be harsh, and most importantly, be constructive.
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Venomtank
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2009
873 IQ
#2
It's quite good. Not sure what the mood is, but at times it definately sounds kind of moody and depressing. Just my personal opinion. I like how the bass is not just the quavers and quavers; there's a nice likc going on with the bass which you can hear throughout the song. At times I could barely hear the clean guitar, not sure if thats my computer or not, but even still. The harshness of the distorted guitar is maybe a bit to high. Don't know if in a live situation you'd be able to hear what the clean guitar is doing. Otherwise it definately sonds good